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William




Warmly you touched my heart
Inside showing me
Love like never before-
Lasting over years apart
In search of a love, never found
And yet, when our eyes met again, knowing
My heart is yours forever and for always

Deeply you caressed
Another chord within me
Lingering thoughts and memories
Everlasting through all of yesterdays-

Eternity is now ours
Lovingly we begin again
Looking to the future,
I love you more each and every day
Onto thee I giveth all of myself
Take my hand and look
Towards eternity with me.





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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 16
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    wow

    wow and william both start from w...and seems so right for you....I am kind of envious of williams that has so intense a love backing him up......love dthis intense prtrayal of love for a man...Loved this one..keep penning

  • sgking123 silver member
    November 8
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    wow

    simple and pretty staright forward portrayal of warm love and deep bond with someone emotional and speacial---for a while i came to a poem that was largely free of verbiage..super stuff........do visit me if you like


  • Bluemonday silver member
    October 31

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    Williams a lucky man....I dont normally read verse with no rhyme but this kind captivated me...It was lovely thank you...Good luck in the comp..Dan


  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 31

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    a sweet declaration inviting years sighs and smiles.

    nice lines.

  • Okay - you put it out there. Well done, dear One. Hope this finds it's mark!



    & Blessings,
    ~ Jan ~


  • Tqop
    October 30
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    Lovely and romantic. I love the twinkling stars.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 30

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    A truly beautiful acrostic for your someone
    Love is precious; a rare and beautiful gift to be cherished
    I wish you many years of life, love, and light, dear soul
    Hugs,
    Sandy

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