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Happy Halloween

Ghouls, goblins and spider webs
Zombies and things that are dead.
Goosebumps and screams fill the night sky.
Strange things make the kids want to cry.

Vampire werewolves and witches
Punkins and things that have stitches.
Monsters and Magic behind the door.
But becarful for a scare might make you hit the floor.

Creaks screeches and dying cats
chainsaws and frightening bats
Headless things and spooky fog can be deadly
Oh how I do hope you are more then ready.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Author notes

I hope you all have a safe and fun halloween.

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  • PureCountry
    November 10

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    An Endearing Write

    of the season. Many thanks for penning this seasonal wish to the rest of us.

    My apologies for my lack of interaction of late. Things have been horrible at best, but will improve given time. I do wish you the best, and continued good health in all that you endure.

    let me hear from you sometime.

    PureCountry
    aka Silent Hawk


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 3

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    love it....so much fun...makes you want
    to .......Turn the house into a huge haunted mansion!

    way to write!
    ears/Seattle sis

    Excellent flow and rhyme


  • Little Blue Bird
    October 30

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    Good write

    But I saw a few spelling mistakes, and one line that doesn't make sense. I've put the problems in parenthesis and the correct spelling out beside the line the typo is in.

    Vampire (warewolves) and witches = werewolves (also may want to add commas after each creature)
    Punkins and (thing) that have stitches. = things
    Monsters and Magic behind the door.
    But (becarful) for a scare might make you hit the floor. = be careful

    (Creeks) (screetches) and dying cats = Creaks, screeches
    chainsaws and frightening bats
    (Headless things and spooky fog can deadly) maybe add 'be' between 'can' and 'deadly'
    Oh how I do hope you are more then ready.


    Over all I like it. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 29
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    really cute!

    I enjoyed reading this. It is a fun description of Halloween. Thank you for sharing.

  • Dark Edge
    October 29
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    lol, very nice Little Fawn! has kind of a spooky edge to it that is soooo halloweenish!

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