"I have a question,
and an answer from your heart
is the only one that will do."
"It's a simple one, I know,
but without it, nothing else will do,"
"Can I love you,
will you be mine
till the end of time?"
"Do you need to ask?
All that I am-
I am because
of you, your love."
"You have given to me
more than the air
that fills my lungs."
"I have found,
that with you,
I can be 'me'
without reservation"
"So without a doubt,
my answer is...
...Yes"
"Now tell me,
will you let me
love you,
will you be mine
till the end of time?"
"You are the one,
the only one,
that has ever believed in me"
"With you-
I can be 'me' "
"Yes, you can love me
till the end of time."
Author notes
For Someone*
I love you baby
A contest entry
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This is beautiful
Well written love poem for sure Bravo
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Awe...This was very sentimental. I'm sure the person you've written this to would love this.
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Sooo very beautiful, dear soul
Sigh...
This just reads so beautifully; makes me think of my Northern Star and all that he means to me
Love this!
All the best to you!!
Sandy -
like the sincerity of the exchange shared - so hopeful and loving. beautifully done.
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This was extremely beautiful. I love your writing style.
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So beautiful, sways like an Angelic lullaby, or a Holy Hymn. *Sigh*
ya All~Ways,
~ Jan ~
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