You are my strength,
you carry my entire purpose
within your possession.
You are my moral subsistence.
You are my hope,
you supply me
cantlets of desire,
seducing my humility,
and you as well.
You are my conscience,
pure and selfless.
You conceal me safely away
from all trace of penitence.
You are my humility,
my unpretentious sheperd,
and I bow before you
with dutiful affection.
You are my blessing...
I am yours...
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Dedicated to my friend, Findingurself.less..She is an angel..She faithfully reads my poems, good or bad, and always responds. Check out her work. She is so talented.
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Wow such a stunning dedication to your friend, Simply beautifu and I very much enjoyed your poem, I loved this poem from start to finsh and it was a true pleasure to read, my favorite part was...
You are my hope,
you supply me
cantlets of desire,
seducing my humility,
and you as well.
You are my conscience,
pure and selfless.
You conceal me safely away
from all trace of penitence
So beautiful and inspiring as you notice below my little addition lol
Together we share our paths , in time
Your the ray of sunshine which illuminates my soul
And It is through the beauty of your eyes
I can see all
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Thanl you kindly..Your comments always make my day..I appreciate them always
John
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awh :)
i really liked reading this. it is written very beautifully
you must really care about this person
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stunning piece written on love and reality for in this wriet is about a person that in your life is the prefect dimension.. well said as always John.. love the meaning and the message Hugs always Angel♥
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So nice
So nice words especially liked the line "seducing my humility", well done! -
What a wonderful dedication to your friend Findingurself! I have many AP friends here since '04. What a treasure to find some that have suck with us through thick and thin. Very nicely done! ~Sie
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"You carry my entire purpose within your possession." This says so much. Beautifully written piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow this is so beautiful, I absolutely adore this piece. You are like the friend everyone dreams of
makes me feel happy inside and sad. Great write dear friend!
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What a beautiful tribute to a supportive friend. I am totally interested in reading her works and I will because of your suggestion. This is stunning and spills from the heart I know is huge and genuine. Simply breathtaking!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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T%hank you kindly
John
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John,
This is a beautiful dedication for a friend..I'm sure that findingurslf.less will cherish this piece..these are words spoken from the heart..well done..David
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Thank you very much
John
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This is a beautiful dedication for a friend
No other words than ... lovely
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Thank you kindly
John
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jus YOU John.....nothing else....awesome
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Thank you, my friend..so kind you are
John
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Awe, this was beautiful!
I hope whoever you penned this
for knows how truly lucky she is
To have words like this expressed to
the one you love is a wonderful thing.
Thank you for sharing this,
Mandi
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Thank you kindly..so nice you are
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Bubs,
This is just sooooo beautifully written! What a great job you did on this one! I love it! You have a way with words like no other I know. Great job! Makes a heart melt bubs! It does, it does!
and love
Nyetta
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Thanks, sis,,all in the family
John
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"You are my hope...Conscience" I love it! Beautiful! Oh, to have someone feel this way about me! Every chicks dream!
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Thank you kindly..so sweet of you
John
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