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Just reassuring

No suggestion a face could express
Nor gift would clarity
The moments of times past
That shall be cherished
Withheld in utter grace

Immensity of a friend's love
Demand my words to be sung
Well, just spoken silently on paper
Till time fade it print
then misplace in living memory

Wishing you blessing
Prayers on your continue happiness
Reassuring you, of my affection
To unlast
This would be only one of many
Which would expose that beautiful smile

This is for my little sis on here princessleejwctlvr2. She now a very happily married woman.So I write this out of love for her.

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  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 2

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    Aww Big brother this is a truly amazing an incredible piece!!!! I am very touched!!!! What a truly sweet write such an incredible expression of your love for me!!! You have a wonderful loving compassionate heart!!!! I can't thank you enough!!!! This is so so so very beautiful!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! I love you big brother this is lovely!!!!!!!! I will treasure this always!!!!!!!


    • Dajuan
      November 3
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      You are more than welcome.Very deserving to have people say this about you.Even with this, it only covers a portion of what you mean. Very understanding, sweet,spiritual,and openhearted.
      Even if we are not by blood, or never have the change to see each other in person, your my sister.

      Love you now and always


  • TheCSIgurl
    October 31

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    Awww! The last lines are especially beautiful!

    I'm just curious as to whether you need the apostrophe after "time's." Did the "past" in a sense "belong" to time, or were you just trying to describe "past times"?

    That was my only critique; the rest of the poem was so sweet. I wish I had such a dedicated older sibling!


    • Dajuan
      October 31
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      Thank you for reading my poem.

      You know, I see what you're saying. Thank you for pointing that out.I happy you enjoy this one.


  • Meme Wheeler
    October 31
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    This is very beautiful and candid.


    • Dajuan
      October 31
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      Meme, it has been a while.Thank you for taking time and read one of my writes.

  • diseasedpoet
    October 30
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    congradulations well done

    transended the essence of emotion


  • eatingupyourmind
    October 30

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    The way you write is absolutely beautiful..
    Everyword is put there for a reason, everyword adds to its beauty.
    I think its flawless

    If someone wrote something so stunning and heartfelt for me i would cherish it forever.


    • Dajuan
      October 30
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      Thanks.
      I hope soon someone who love you, will write you something amazing.


  • Daizee silver member
    October 29

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    Beautiful expression of your love for her


    • Dajuan
      October 29
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      Thank you so much for that. It came from the heart.

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