Incomprehensible.
Like water that streams
Through your fingers
Like infinite space
Enveloping you
Like spirits drifting
Upon the wind
Free me from my
Cumbersome reality
Save me from my
Stubborn sensibility
Hold me...
And all
Will
Slip
Away
Are you right?
Are you safe?
I wish...
I wish I didn't care.
Convoluted thoughts
Lead to convoluted poetry.
Author notes
Yeah...sort of seems like pieces of different poems I know. Go with it.
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wow really good!! love the way you organized your poem as well
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