you painted your heart
within mine, from day one-
a sunset to gaze upon adoringly-
speaking to my heart-
softly and tenderly,
with yours,
caressing me-
from the inside out,
touching me with
feathered strokes
across hardened heart-
whispering softly-
of treasured sepia dreams
built for two-
by two-
me and you-
Author notes
For Someone*
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Just, WOW!
& Blessings,
~ Jan ~

-
sweet images and lovely expressions shared my friend. really like those closing 5 lines in particular. bravo.


-
Wonderful That states it all..The beginning of the rest of your life..You have reached the level of perfection. You are fee..go get him..wow
John

-
Another beautiful sharing this is, my friend

I love reading about the deep feelings you hold for someone; it is a wonderful thing
All the very best to you, dear!
Hugs,
Sandy -
-
Thanks Sandy
This special person is beyond amazing, and well I adore everything about him. I have missed him for so many years, and I love having a second chance with him. But I guess you can already tell that
-
1 - 5 of 5





