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Let it be

The kiss of october sky,
the pain of truth,
that lingers on..
and will never die.

i look to you,
the painful truth,
it kisses me and never lets go.


we were once in love,
now its gone.
you tell me you still love me,
but how can that be the truth.

we are too different to be in love,
but some reason i still do.
but i can't.
i'm letting you go.

its time to love another,
the only one that can set me free..
i think he might be the one...
my heart wants to let it be.

just let the love settle,
and just let it be.

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  • Darkmoon
    November 8

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    This is a nicely written poem. Full of emotion. But the print needs to be darker. I had to highlight it to be able to read. So you might get more views if you darken it. Good write and thanks for the entry. Good luck.