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Sunburst

Embrace
as the Sun explodes behind you,
as you hurtle forward,
unmoving
vividly glowing in your new-found solitude,
wrapped in yourself
comfort and coldness
touched by the cooling waters of Creation
seeking solace and safety within
and fire shall rain down from the sky
but you shall remain golden-touched and serene
for your heart ignited on the waves of the solar flare
and you are evolving,
moving on
the next phase strikes upon your back
engulfing you
and pulling you to pieces.

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  • Oh my goodness! Much stirred up in that pot of gold. I just solved it - the age old riddle. It's at the end of a misty, misty rainbow.

    Well done!

    & Blessings,
    ~ Jan ~


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 30

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    for your heart ignited on the waves of the solar flare and the smoke for this excisions reaped the turning point of parts into pieces.. I love the way you took this prompt and the imagery you have left for mind... thank you for penning for me hugs Always Angel♥