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The World's Enemy.

Walk around acting like you’re nothing
Like you’re not really there
It doesn’t matter anyway; no one really seems to care.

Put on your happy act
Let the happiness flow on in
When really it’s all just one big lie, but you can’t let the depression win.

Head towards the ground
Nothing left to really live for
All the pain that keeps crushing you; more and more.

Falling deeper below
Hoping never to emerge from such hell
Left to sit and deal with the pain; alone you dwell.

Author notes

Crap. I know. I'm so peed off D:

This is how I feel..

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  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    October 30

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    This is a really amazing poem.
    The feelings portrayed are
    relatable and real. =]
    Great job.


  • XxMoonLiteAngelxX
    October 30

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    Awwwwh =[ It sucks to feel this way.. :/ Im sowwie. *hugs* if you ever want tp vent or anything.. Im here to lend an ear. <3


  • unheard-whispers
    October 30
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    great write. if you need to talk im here


  • Naznomarn
    October 30
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    I care! <3 *Loves*


  • glitterydoom
    October 29

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    i careee.
    i love you
    and people are horrible

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