Moments in time
Captured in essence
Tranquility resided
In those long gone
Remnants of memories
Never known to those
Who were left behind
Or never knew
Unmirrored tragedy
Unkempt joy
But mine...
A face ever shadowed
In guilt
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 8 by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
700 points, ended October 30, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
this refrain is not uncommon.....and so is easy to comment......I ahve done alot on earlier poems...but this i found unique in imagery and structure..first you make..then you break..then you toss in pathos....well done...visit me I am pathos rideen nowadyas -
A sad taste of remembering is spilled within your poetic ink
Your voice has spoken the truth of past, do we remember those ..
Thank you for your wonderful entry and my best wishes
Julie
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