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Return, it's crap. :)

Fists curling tightly,
Eyes shining brightly,
I dare you tell me no.
A curse of fear,
I pray that you, dear,
Beg me not to go.
Upbeat chance,
A fling of romance,
Now it’s nothing more.
Fairytale fights,
Emotional heights,
Craving sweet adore.
Scream, say goodbye,
Expect no reply,
For my lips will refrain.
Taunt me with cure,
Keep hearts secure,
I am no longer in pain.

I don't like it! D:

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  • firefly star
    November 1

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    i liked the rhyming in this. and trust me, i have read a lot lot wurse! this was a good job and i'm not just saying that. Keep writing poet!


  • Shellibee
    October 29
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    welcome back lovee, you were missed. i really like this, alot. im curious to know what got you back in the poetry writing mood?


    • Second.Choice
      October 30
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      Thanks chick, it's shit, butt i'm glad you like it.
      Curiosity, that is the illusion I was aiming to create.
      <3
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