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Texting Truth.

Guess who? It'll say... Starts the same every day. Or something akin,

Each text with this bland, inviting greeting...

Trying to engage her in conversation. [Usually when we're eating!]

 

Oh, the fun you have watching a film with someone who isn't there-

Face buried in a keypad, or else a waiting, vacant stare...

Forever longing for the vibration, that little reassurance gem, 

 

The one that tells her she's the only one with any friends.

Hell, I mean no harm when I talk this way...!

Every.second of every.minute of every.single.day

 

Buried in the mechanics of a touch screen phone, 

Love it when you're out, on it when you're home.

Obviously, I'm rejected because it's not me you want, 

On the screen are those words (just a disguised taunt..)

Don't know what they say though, you never let me see...

Yes, I am aware that I'm making myself the enemy.

 

Put it down once though, so we can just co-exist?

Honour the rare moments when I'm not actually dismissed?

Okay, I'll leave now. So you can talk about me to him..., 

Needing solace in a screen linking to a name on a whim.

Eventually, I'll learn my lesson, and I'll just leave you alone...

 

     {But for now, I live with the fact that I know nobody's home.}

 

 

 

Author notes

"I guess we're all one phone call from our needs."
Closer to Love by Mat Kearney.

"Snap your fingers, I'll come running, and leave again when you're bored with me...I'll make it easy."
Never Mind Me by Maria Mena.

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The main theme of this is that I have realized that these days your phone is like a new best friend. It never leaves your side, Just In Case.
There have been a couple conversations recently too... It was pointed out at a gathering that if one person whips out their phone, automatically everyone else does. Just like they're proving they have friends too. (I know, 'cos I do it!)
We don't live for the people we know anymore.

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  • Defiant Justice
    November 10
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    hmmm you make a good point here everyone does it and thoss who say they dont are just lying.

  • DinkyDiver gold member
    November 6
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    haha marvellous and soo true lol love it, good natural rhyme there xx