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Rainy Days,Love,and Drugs

It was just one of those rainy days. I know it was going to rain but I couldn't seem to make myself get up. I over did it again my body felt so heavy I had no strength lef I guess it was the aftermath of the drug. Rain drop fall from the sky pounding against my body! Looking up into the sky the sun shines so dully just like me a beam of sunshine that shines so dully on a rainy day. The winds whisper through the trees to me they whiper so sweetly to me I love you. My heart shatter under the weight of those sweet swords. Tears roll down my cheeks mixing with the rain. How could something so sweet as those words be said to me in this kind of state? I could only be dream! My heart swells with pure happiness. A beam of sunshine falls on my cheek like a forbidden stolen kiss. Its warmth spreads through out my body like the sweetest drug I've ever had. I never know how love was so much like a drug.

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  • iRapeRainbows
    November 11

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    Haha, I love this poem, putting love and drug into the same poem is diffrant, but Love is like a sweet but bitter drug.


  • Syko Path
    October 30
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    lol i love it jackie (I DIDNT EVEN READ ALL OF IT....)

    that note was amazingness!