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Reflecting Back


Reflecting back on Spring
a sadness fills my soul
just how my heart was fooled
that he could make me whole



Repeating past mistakes
my mind did misconstrue
the words brought memories
of tender love with you

 


My failure to protect
fragile emotions so true
left me burned and crying
for a love long overdue

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • condor gold member
    November 20
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    So sad and so full of emotion. One could feel the pain in these words and the sorrow of losing this love which torments the soul. But, somewhere, we all have a soulmate who is waiting for us and one day that person will come by and these memories of sadness will fade. Such a beautiful piece. Thank you so much for sharing.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    November 11

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    We know to well don't we..??
    I can only confirm with the words of Jeannie...

    And I am sure there is somebody out there waiting for you...someone true and lovely just as you

    XXJeannette


  • BeachBum1
    October 30

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    amazing

    this was stunning from beginning to end your words were romantic and reflective without being cliche or cheesy. You rhyme flawless through me into the pace which was maintained.It was also very emotive and sad, I genuinely wished it was longer I could have read so much more. 'just how my heart was fooled
    that he could make me whole' that was my fave bit. keep writing, thanks for entering good luck in my contest


  • Denerica
    October 30

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    Spoken true from you heart and soul. Can feel the sadness, the emotion even solitude in this excellent write. Blessings.


  • annother gold member
    October 29

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    Written with a sad pen such beautiful words by a talented poet. I feel the emotion with each line. Best of luck in the contest.


    Ann


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 29

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    excellent

    I know you had told me about a guy you had been talking to
    But like Jeannie said you are such a wonderful sweet kind person
    He is a I agree with her on this he is a damned fool
    I know you will find someone soon............they say there is someone for everyone...and you will find your Knight in Shining armor one day
    Best of luck in the contest.........this is a winner in my book
    I have been sick and not online much got a Z Pack today so hopefully better soon
    I just posted a new one too do hope you come visit me
    Hugs
    Your sis always
    Susan~~~


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 29

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    He is a damned fool and he will pay for what
    he has done. But you were too good for him.
    You are such a wonderful, beautiful, and
    loving person. And your Knight is out there.
    His stallion isn't equipped with GPS.
    This is really well written and tugs at the
    heart. Good luck in the contest.
    Hang in there

    Jeannie

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