your sharp smile opens to stark white teeth
as you stare with flint eyes, into me
sharp edges tug slowly
at my neck
you drink my life
you bleed my soul
you have no fangs
you have no goal
you feed off me
with a mind so barricated
from the rest
you drink no blood
but with me you flood
you survive off my hopes
you feed off my dreams
but when you do
i feel so close to you
cold and null
you numb the firery pain
souless pire, why are you here
loveless vamp, when can you be free'd...
Author notes
reeeeeeaaaalllly bad but it was on my mind, so i wrote it out
what is your interpretation of it?
Comments
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wasnt bad at all, i really enjoyed reading this piece!! keep writing you are a great poet!!
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great strong feelings great detaill keepit up!
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wow
this is very good...
nice words and flow..
really liked this part..
you drink my life
you bleed my soul
you have no fangs
you have no goal
you feed off me..
excellent....well done for penning this poem
and keep it up
Jayde
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