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Girl in the Black

She's just a girl  dress in all black.Befriending so many wonderful people who know nothing about her true self.Gorgeous girls and sexy boys everywhere she truns she doesn't care for their whispers.Her secret crush on a boy who flirts so carelessly with so many other girls.She can feel it growing inside her and whispering things into her ear that she's jealous.She's always bored she doesn't understand why.She hides all her emotions and replace them with something unrealjust because she doesn't have any desire to feel.

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