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The Darkness and the Deep

In the Beginning
There was darkness
An empty formless world
Shadow cloaked
A shimmering diaphanous moth, the Spirit
Wings across the waters
Dances on the lips of the deep
The void that will become a world
A Voice speaks out
The Word
And a universe is born

Two Millennium pass
Mankind is bound in evil
The darkness that his world
Was birthed from
Has corrupted his heart
The Creator drowns the planet
A great wave
Breaks the path of the moon
Floods the earth

An iron king, heartless and vile
Rails against his Maker
Rivers run red
His greatest treasure
Harvested
As death's angel passes
In the night

A people follow a column of fire
Burning in the twilit sky
Upholds the stars
Trapped between the
Darkness and the sea
Until a pathway opens
Through the deep

A beggar, blind since the day
His milky eyes met sunlight,
Crouches on the roadside
The great Teacher approaches
Spit, mud, salve, sight
Brings clay into his eyes
Tears away the night

A ship is shattered
As fangs of wind and water
Wrench hope from
The chests of its crew
A hand raised from sleep
A Voice speaks out
The Word
And the storm and seas subside

A fool steps upon the waves
Follows his Master
Forgets his sight
And sinks into the deep
Until a savior's hand
Cuts through shadows
Bringing life

A man, a god, a hero
Hangs between heaven and earth
Impaled upon a crucifix
Cries in death's wild agony
Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani
Drops his head without an answer
Breathes his last
And darkness falls

A beast rises from the waves
Abomination of the Heavens
Bringing the world
To its knees
A river flowing upward
Higher than its life-spring
Cannot be

A curse, a final damnation
Is breathed on the sons of perdition
Who are cast into
The outer darkness
With their god

A Kingdom descends
Alights upon earth
And behold the night
Has disappeared
For the Maker abides
On a planet remade and renamed
So too, the sea has vanished
For He at last has banished
The darkness and the deep


~Iliad Keys


Now the earth was formless and empty, darkness was over the surface of the deep, and the Spirit of God was hovering over the waters...

...God saw that the light was good, and He separated the light from the darkness...

...Woe to those who call evil good and good evil, who put darkness for light and light for darkness...

...The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned....

...I am the light of the world. Whoever follows me will never walk in darkness, but will have the light of life...

...You are going to have the light just a little while longer. Walk while you have the light, before darkness overtakes you....

...I will lead the blind by ways they have not known, along unfamiliar paths I will guide them; I will turn the darkness into light before them...

...But the children of the kingdom shall be cast out into outer darkness...

...They are wild waves of the sea, foaming up their shame; wandering stars, for whom blackest darkness has been reserved forever...

...Yet I am writing you a new command; its truth is seen in him and you, because the darkness is passing and the true light is already shining...

...Am I leading a rebellion, that you have come with swords and clubs? Every day I was with you in the temple courts, and you did not lay a hand on me. But this is your hour— when darkness reigns...

...From the sixth hour until the ninth hour darkness came over all the land. About the ninth hour Jesus cried out in a loud voice, "Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani?"—which means, "My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?"...

...You are all sons of the light and sons of the day. We do not belong to the night or to the darkness...

...For we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world....

...This is the message we have heard from him and declare to you: God is light; in him there is no darkness at all...

...And I saw a new heaven and a new earth: for the first heaven and the first earth were passed away; and there was no more sea...

...The city does not need the sun or the moon to shine on it, for the glory of God gives it light, and the Lamb is its lamp. On no day will its gates ever be shut, for there will be no night there.

Author notes

All quotes taken from the New International Version of the Bible.

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  • fiona8 silver member
    October 29

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    This was quite an undertaking. I am sure you are proud. I read it once, and am going to go back to it now. Really well done.
    I like this little line: Shadow cloaked. This one too: Dances on the lips of the deep



    • Iliad Keys
      October 29
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      Thank you very much, and I'm still in the process of tweaking it, so help is always appreciated.