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a myriad of leaves

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a myriad of leaves
glide quietly to earth
~Winter’s tears will follow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 10

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    How did I miss this I agree this
    is a gentle offering of fall giving
    way to winter. Makes me hope for
    snow! I love it but we don't get
    much here I'll hafta head up your
    way for that I reckon! Great haiku.

    Jeannie

  • onesq4wsrt
    October 30

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    very nice

    An interestingly free seasonal piece set in a mood of calm and not the chaos of autumn's wind-driven, swirlingness. With a dash of sadness perhaps...I guess winter can be a low mood representation . Simple, contemporary and senyruesque in style. Your poem delights in leaving the reader to decide on the finer details of its theme. Very nice


  • Olivias Violin
    October 30

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    very good haiku

    Did you paint the picture?


  • Denerica
    October 30

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    Beautiful...winter's tears is brilliant. A wonderful vision, profound. Excellent. Blessings.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 29

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    excellent~

    This is excellent
    It should be in a contest
    It would be a winner
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

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