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Omnipotent, Your god, Your maker.

Put on that collar Baby,
Cause you sure as hell ain't no angel.

With those filthy, delicious *Pristine* concoctions.
Popping those Prescription Placebo Pills.
Without even the decency, or the fucking audacity.
To fight back (Against me)

your god, your maker.
Paradox fairytales F

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                                         from your mouth.

 

 

Yesteryear came quicker than you thought.
Forsaken, like a ghost, you travel from

Foolish to inept, gracelessly decieving me,

but all the while, im watching and waiting for my time to

strike you down like the ominipotent being that i am.

Naively thinking that you may have defeated me.

Beaten me down and scared me away. 

but believe it or not, i'm still around.

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S'been a while. Bad title i know... xDDD

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 2

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    it was ...luscious in it's poetic form....
    perhaps we should send it straight to the Vatican
    nasty
    little priests for years and years
    being transferred parish to parish
    tormenting children.....

    may they shutter ...when...they read this!
    way to write
    it gave me the creeps!

    ears/Seattle sis
    GLUTTON SALUTE
    took some guts to write it!


  • spiritual wolf
    October 31
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    p.s i thought the title was perfect for this piece


  • spiritual wolf
    October 31

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    i loove the strength radiating from this piece@! it was so fullfilling. i love the format of it and everything. amazing write

  • Wandering Scribe
    October 29

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    :)

    chloe, shut up stop sayin they're bad.... this isnt bad at all, it's not as powerful as your others but it isn't bad at all. eesh, you.
    -will eat your soul now-
    >=D
    -nom-