Our lips meet and for an instant , I feel like you could kiss my imperfections away.
It was in this moment that I knew things would never be the same.
You take my hand and I fall into lust with you , feeling immortal ;
I want to make you feel the same.
I consume myself in your burning eyes ,
With each kiss they light up brighter ;
Engulfing our little world in such assuring light ;
I'll never need to see the sun again.
I pull you closer and feel your eyelashes on my cheek,
Such simple peace in that one movement.
It's so hard not to just die right here ;
We could burn in each others arms.
Alicia M. Donovan ŠAll Rights Reserved
Author notes
This Flesh A Tomb - Atreyu (Ohhmyyyggoooddd ! I love this song <3)
A contest entry
- CALLING ALL ATREYU FANS!!!!!!!!! by TwiztidMaggot.
400 points, ends December 16, 6 entries
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wow that sounded profesional bravo
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wow! I love this. You did an amazing job writing it. Nice take on the song.
That's a fave of mine too. But my # one fave is Right Side Of The Bed... (for reasons that are explained in some of my poems lol) Thank you SOOOO much for entering! Keep up your great work! I wish you the best of luck!!!
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Thank youuu.
And yesss !! Right Side of the Bed is AMAZING ! Ughh !!!! <3
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awesome love.. great work
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awsome. love u
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