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Rachel's Rose

Morning sun came leaking through her blinds

casting its nosy presence on those stiffened petals

 

held upright by murky glass.

 

She turned this way and that in restless dreams

 

No doubt dreaming of her rose

 

plucked from a wreath in hidden grief

 

that rested atop a fresh mound of earth

 

muddied by storms and tears.

 

 

There's fresh tap in her rose's vase

 

although stem brittle and petals stiff as brown leaves fallen..

 

Even the thorns have lost their sting - break instead of pierce.

 

 

She wakes to press her rose in heavy pages

 

to be placed upon a shelf.

 

Who knows if spine be broke again to read the words

 

within if such dried, once lived life holds her place? 

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 29

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    SO SAD

    Sad, terribly difficult to let go the feelings of missing a loved one, the rose even though wilted will be pressed between sweet words to be seen again when the heart mends enough to want the memories to live again.