Kiss me my darling fair,
let our lips ignite a passion within our soul
feeling our bodies against each other
as our hearts cry out
to bond within the throws of our love
letting us shed away our insecurities and fears
revealing our bare innocence to each other
as our fingers explore
every curve of our skin
bringing about such sensation of affection
arms entwine
holding each other so tight
as we explore the boundaries of our love
lying upon this bed together
cuddling with each other
within the silent shadows of this bedroom
my lips caressing your breasts
the taste of your flesh intoxicates me
feeling your shiver under my embrace
your fingers running through my hair
your moans begging for more
touching each other so tenderly
making the yearning for each other growing stronger
till finally our bodies joined as one
friction burning between us like an inferno
as we journey forth into the passions of our own love.
A contest entry
- Give Me Hot Lovin' by StarlightCerulean.
1000 points, ended November 10, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You've taken your reader on a beautiful, tender loving journey of a couple totally wrapped up in each other, the moment and their love. A lovely write, that was a pleasure. ~sugar~
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I love the overall metaphor of a journey ... it seems appropriate for something which should be savoured along the way. Very tenderly expressed.
Mike -
Wow this is beautifull
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Very sensual and tastefully written!
I would say this will do well in the contest
I wish you the very best!
Best wishes,
~Heavenly~
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