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He is Something Different

Holding my hand as we walk in stride
I give a quaint sigh
To the man at my side
A leap and skip my heartbeat
This man a gentleman so sweet
But I know looking at my sneakers on my feet
He is something different is what I see
A brave heart  to handle
Our love a passion that only kindles
But I know looking in his face
A sweetness of his kiss to taste
Even while dancing in the rain
With me falling in love all over again
He is something different is what I see
The dozen roses he bought me
But a man to let my soul be free
This man is he
All I ever need
But I know looking at the poem he wrote
Of his love for me is afloat
He is something different is what I see
A man to love for me...

Author notes

This poem is written for someone very special to me. And I am not listing any names but he knows who he is. Lol to dancing in the rain. : )

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  • babygirl2582 silver member
    October 29
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    Amazing

    He is a lucky man I felt your heartbeat through those amazing words... Well penned poet