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White

Over dinner with diamond teacups
He once told me how he stepped out from the crowd
A dander in a coat of blue
And me, to hang on like a spider
To his chandelier of words
I'd never thought twice until he brought it up
The humor of ice
And how he felt the brightest of all
In the white

Years went by, my hunger for his stories never changed
Although my hips and thighs did
And all I ever wanted was to be the same
Have something he would remember
From the time when his words went on forever
I still owe my life
And my most fruitful moments with him
To the long legs of controversy
Fitted in white

Author notes

white jeans = <3

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  • black-phenoqu
    October 30
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    wow!

    probably the best i have gotten so far


  • I Wonder
    October 29

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    Intriguing! A very good write depicting a slightly sad yet sentimental piece of poetry. A pleasure to read!