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Rage

Defeated, one shall think
As my tears run freely.
But my anger is behind
What no one else can see.
Motivated by my fears.
These hurtful feelings don't show.
As my loneliness washes away.
To furnish the rage inside.

whispering in your ear

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  • Sinner69
    November 12

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    COOL

    ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH PRETTY COOL DARK AND DIRECT I HAVE SOMETHING SIMILAR CALLED UNDER THE DEVILS WING AND SHADOW RESTLESS WARRIOR IS PRETTY COOL TOO...LOL HAVE A GOOD ONE.