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Battle, War

As battles rage
And cries are not heard.
As hands fall silent
In wordless prayer.
My heart doth races,
As my eyes craddle thee.
As my love runns cold,
So does your blood runns free.
This battle shall be won,
By enemy hand's alone.
But this war is not over.
As justice needs to be served.

whispering in your ear

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