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Spiders...

Squirm squirm

Twitch twitch

Die

thats how the spiders go
when you drench them in gasoline
and when you light them on fire
when you play God and end their lives

Squirm squirm

Twitch twitch

Die...

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  • Topnotchsy
    November 3

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    Wow this is really twisted her. The onomatopoeia added to the feel and eeriness, as did the background. Nice write.