word - sound
word - vibrations
world - full of vibrations
all singing underground
spirit - life
spirit - living
in the vibrating world
communicating with words
devil - believed
devil - dividing
soul - piece of spirit
seems apart and alone
in a strange and unusual home
mind - perceives
mind - believes
judges - describing
good thing, bad thing
pretty, ugly - like, dislike
heart - responds
mind makes judgments
heart makes emotions
resonating with devotion
two hearts
three hearts
billions of hearts
sending out vibrations
in the hidden astral realm
emotional words of the hearts
sent to minds triggering thoughts
world of words of many kinds
sound, light, hearts and atoms
vibrating, oscillating sensations
outer world communication
all words, created by thought
from a great, imaginative Mind
In a list
A contest entry
- Your Voice by silverscent.
700 points, ended November 15, 20 entries
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This has quite a unique format to it, which on first read I wasn't sure of...but I'm beginning to like it now. I think it does show a unique voice. Thanks for entering
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Wise-Wonderful...
I have enjoyed the reading of "Words" for its contents and message.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Hmmmm, this poem has potential. Some nice thoughts. A bit too much with the repetition of the same words.
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Yes, you're right. I over did the repetition of the vibration idea too much. Think I might shorten it a bit. Thanks for your input.
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Precisely. Too many "vibrations";-)... Otherwise it works really good.
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The poem builds nicely to a crescendo and has admirable internal consistency. I enjoyed the read a geat deal.
Mike -
bravo!
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your voice
who doesn't read and understand has such a bumpy road ahead
we are sending out and it will come back
vibration are the way we create
it is unseen and unknown by many
very brilliantly and creatively put to Bonita...
exceptional as always
I say send out LOVE...
God bless you my friend...
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