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The Promise

i made a promise
that i wouldn't do it anymore
a promise to you and to me
that that was the last time
these wounds would soon heal
and the pain would be gone
all that would be left
would be the scars
and the memories

this is a new beginning
and you are so proud
i've over come this monster
that lived inside
it's been a long time
since i've seen
that shine in your eyes

so how do i tell you
that i've let you down....
i'm sorry
but
i
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