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Theory Of Negativity

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All are echoes radiating back

from particles of time,

creating, manifesting from

energy unwind.

 

Black energy, clay

formed the earth,

dark and light infused

created mortal birth.

 

Light is breath

animator, host;

united Trinity,

Father (divine),Son (matter)Holy ghost (mediator).

 

Waves of black energy

rooted in soil,

attached to human nature;

creates turmoil.

 

Waves of light energy

rooted from Divine,

colors of creation

are able to align.

 

Balance is necessary

as waves create.

Love is light energy,

dark is hate.

 

When all and nothing

are out of place,

universal laws

correct human race.

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  • sakkthi
    November 4
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    vivid description

    When all and nothing
    are out of place,
    universal laws
    correct human race.

    Electrifying lines.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    November 2

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    Wonderful! Definately deserving of that shiny Gold! I've never quite looked at Negativity and Light theory in this way.. It makes sense to me.. I feel enlightened.. So thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts

    Amber


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 2

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    Ah, dear Kathy, you produce logic
    when there is seemingly none,
    creatively prove your theories
    with commanding realizations!

    Golden, indeed, youir rush of energy!!

    M-C


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 2

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    Wow another amazing write, I love the title! This really gets down to the cause and effect of negativity. I often wonder how to escape the negativity in my life, though most of it is caused by relative. Very confusing! Anyway I really enjoyed this write, I will be back soon to read more

  • sleepinglion
    October 30

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    I like what you are about here Kathy
    Jesus crucified is symbolic of what we are ''Cross Man''
    vertical and horizontal cross can represent our heavenly and earthly origins, (your dark and light. Well done
    david


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 30

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    This is a stunning take on the prompt..WOW..i never anticipated a response such as this..you combined spirituality with the forces of light and the evils or negativity as dark..seems to havea yin yang theory ( if you believe in that) I love the following..

    Light is breath
    animator, host;
    united Trinity,
    Father (divine),Son (matter)Holy ghost (mediator).

    Very uplifting ending as well,,finding balance between the conflicts of good and evil..this is truely a deep thought provolking write
    Wish you the best of lucg..many blessings..David




  • Providence
    October 29

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    Although we have had great prophets and teachers who have tried to guide us towards love, I think may of the effects we are seeing today...From the Earth herself and the stars...is a manifestation of much of the negativity we have expressed on this realm. AND ONLY WE CAN CHANGE IT!

    Excellent work! Prophetic in itself!

    Bravo!

    Marianne


  • Denerica silver member
    October 29
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    Wow profound...what insight. Way to go sis, you put it out there with theory of course. Excellent. Blessings.


  • marandah gold member
    October 29
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    You are indeed talented

    and insightful.

    Thank you for sharing.


  • Rovingone gold member
    October 29

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    always so well done. You keep on coming out with all these fantastic, inspiring poems. You truly have the knack and a message to deliver.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 29

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    well penned for the words in message told the message it sought in mind and wisdom.. for the inspiration in this piece was well thought of Hugs always Angel♥


  • humblpye gold member
    October 29

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    And here you go again! my word Kathy, this is your ball park all right this is where you truly excell
    This is the whole story, encapsulated in a few lines; I don't think you missed a single thing...you have such a gift and methinks it is the gift of wisdom.
    I can't rate this, it just blows me away, it's the kind of write that I want to keep coming back to, one, for inspiration and two, for the sheer pleasure.
    Thank you for sharing your knowledge you are an inspiration to all

    John


  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 29
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    I love this. It really paints a vivid image for the reader and a sense that all is going to work out in the end ok. - Bonita


  • MsChrispy
    October 29
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    This is amazing!!! I personally LOVE rhyme, which makes it even better. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 29

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    I see gold in this one!
    In my humble opinion, no two ways about it, you have gold!
    Wow!
    Awesome writing here, my friend!
    I love it!
    All the best to you but I think you have the best already

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