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Imagining

Urgent time beckons
merging flows
rushing
silver streams of imagining
earthly hearts slowly quiver
awesome forces take power.

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  • silverscent gold member
    November 15

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    Yes, the brevity in this piece gave it great strength.
    I think word choice is all the more important in a concise write, and I enjoyed your imagery in this piece.
    Thanks for entering.


  • meic
    October 30
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    The language used suits the theme of your poem admirably. I applaud your brevity.

    Mike