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You Deserve Better Than Me

you want me,
so much that i can't be.
Admiring from a distance,
Sometimes cursing my existence.

Wanting what i won't willingly give you,
scared of what i'll do,
wanting to end everything,
because i'm scared of what it'll do to you, if it's a fling.

Worrying myself to death,
with every breath.
you're not just someone i can so easily be with,
not with how our emotions shift.

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  • missmagemae
    November 4
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    explain please.


  • Xx.Toxic.xX
    October 29

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    a sobering write, that leaves me pondering my own relationships. it holds all the fear and worry of the future that i myself have experienced. you've got talent. you've done a great job at applying it.


  • Gothic-lolita
    October 29
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    very good

  • DeathandGrief
    October 29
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    good job chels...i kno hw much potential u have...n this, rite here, writing poetry, is hw u apply it...n u do a dam good job of it...

  • Flapjackk
    October 29

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    I like it, it does sounds a lot like you guys relationship.
    It's good. I like the whole "You're not just someone I can so easily be with, not with how our emotions shift" It's a very good line, and it fits you two SO well.
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