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Necklace of love

In the gigantic procession,
who am I hardly matters,
my body is a cage only,
the soul inside it is same for all.
Man comes and goes
in this beloved earth of ours,
she is not mother merely for chosen some
but brings up her every child with same care.
Oh my friend, why bring discrimination?
Talk by heart, you will get due response.
How much you need for yourself,
don't you find hunger in your brethren?
You yourself have only one mouth to eat,
one body to wear cloths,
it is futile to pile up billions of dollars
since you are bound to go to the grave at last.
Love is ever alive in all heart,
as and when you look for it
you will never be deprived.
Let us all become beads of the necklace of love.

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 23
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    'Beads of the neclace of love' - great metaphor. Thank for sharing your poetic talent in the ‘Walls We Build’ contest.


  • faithwhisperer
    November 22
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    I like the thought of reaching out beyond some selfish things we possess...oh, may this be true of all of us! Thanks for your entry!

    faith


  • Taranand
    November 4

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    A simple Truth simply told. It's what we all need to hear.
    That love inside that exists beyond the bounderies of culture or religious beliefs. A love we all can share. Fantastic message

  • fanniesson
    November 1

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    congrads on your win here
    read was enjoyable
    Gold was well earned


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 1

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    OUT STANDING!

    I was so touched by your words i had to read it over again...we truly are all of one family and Earth Mother shows no favorites...if all could just see its not material things that makes who we are but the love for our fellow man and the sharing of all we have...niaish so much for this beautiful piece of wisdom and for entering

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