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One Touch Away(silver)



I wander these inner plains of depression,
plucking feverishly at the remains
of sanity, as insanity laughs at this weakness,
like boning flesh,
ready for sale in a grave of decay,
for words of grace,
never uttered.

A sharp tongue struck secret blows
with bruises that lay hidden,
as hope lay withering
within a weakened soul.

Wounds heal,
but scars become trophies
of faded self worth,
as delusions skip back and forth.

The storm abates momentarily,
until waves of belittlement
once again laugh in torment.

With no flesh left upon bones
dreams reel;
a touch too far away.






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  • This deserves more praise than I can give it. A hundred clappies at least. Absolutely breathtaking piece. Thank you so much for entering.

  • Macsword
    October 30

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    Whoosh

    That's dark enough to be scary poet. You took the word and drove it to its base. Third stanza is a gem. Solid write.


  • penman gold member
    October 29

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    Excellent

    What a powerful write for the prompt. So very creative and well written. Best of luck in the contest