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Updates at Allpoetry again,
but all he knew was that life was over.
But being addicted he had to wait just a little longer,
each time being told 'oops that link seems to be broken'.

So how could the poems flow
without the inspiration of depression, sadness and love!
But sadly, this time,
that severed link has left the muse
to eat away at any fleshy nuances
and bones of sagging metaphor.

No more imagery updates here.
Just the skeleton of an aspiring poet,
that once was a member of Allpoetry,
void of rhyme, free verse and prose.




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  • Macsword
    October 29

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    Poor Poor Poet Indeed!


  • chinmay
    October 29

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    Wow! Stupendous.

    While taking a dig, it does paint an ironic, funny situation. Loved the closing stanza. All the best.


  • penman gold member
    October 29

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    Wonderful

    A very clever write and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest


  • novacaine.
    October 29

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    Ha. Wow. This is great. It's definately not what I expected to come when I seen the picture. But it made me happy. Good luck.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 29

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    LMAO This is priceless! And you are so right! It's enough to make a muse die a slow and painful death..decaying our sanity along with it Brilliant take on the pic.. I think ya nailed this one!


  • marandah gold member
    October 29

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    This is sheer genious!

    I have no head left on my shoulders - laughed it right off!

    Well done my friend

    'to eat away at any fleshy nuances
    and bones of sagging metaphor' this was gruesomely delicious!


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 29

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    ROFLOMAO...DAMN UPDATE
    Brilliant penning dear..wish you the best.. David


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    October 29

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    LMAO!
    You have really penned the way I feel .
    And don't you just hate those updates rawr!!
    A severed link has left the muse.. hahaha!!
    I sooo loved the way you penned this it was just perfect for the prompt and had a bit if truth to to it We all know how we can be addicted to AP. lol,and it had a bit humor in with it
    Thank you so much for entering. Good luck!
    Mandi

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