Pink tongue dances between wriggling toes
licks the arch
courses a warm wet line along inner thigh
her extended belly glows in the moonlight
Pink lips kiss the shaven mound
then up to smooth tight skin
he feels a kick and smiles
Pink tipped fingers sift through tussled hair
nearly there
heavy manhood brushes her belly
Pink tongues meet and twine like twisted candy cane
lick and pull
exploring ears and neck then travel down
to stilled feet and sleeping toes.
A contest entry
- Shivering In Delight by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended November 6, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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VERY SWEET & SENSUAL, BABY!
GOOD LUCK in this contest with this delicious piece that had me hungry for such a sweet and sultry feast on this cloudy, rainy, windy, and gray Sunday morning BUT as I'm all alone here a hot cup of tea and a bagel with sausage, egg, and cheese - will have to do for now until I go back to sleep to dream of licking and sucking the ten toes for starters of the lady of my dreams.
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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gee whiz!
it doesn't get any better than this
I love soft subtle sensuous poetry and you've done a wonderful piece here.
L


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WOW!!!!!
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A lovely piece of sensual poetry all wrapped up in pink.
All the best in the contest.
Love
Suz


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Pity I missed the 'pink' contest but I found another that will suffice!
Thanks for your help babes and the most welcome comment!
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I am not sure what made me take a look at this. I loved it, seeing as I love to explore the body in this way nice work here. Good luck in the contest SH


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Mmmm delicious

A fine sharing in this contest, it is!
(I don't even like "pink" but dang if I don't LOVE this piece!
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Thank you so much for sharing!
Good luck to you!!!!
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