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i can't breath

i remember you
you and me
the way we were
together

i miss you
miss you so much
miss talking to you
the sound of your voice

the words we'd whisper
as we held each other
in our bed
under our blanket

your kiss was my world
gave me reason to breath
look into your eyes
between kisses exchanged

i miss our mornings
god i miss your taste
your lips, tongue, pulse
life has been nothing

you may have given us up
but i had us taken away
you stripped from me all reason
and i can't breath anymore

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i am in so much pain right now... there was no closure and now i'm moving back to where we lived and loved together and i don't kniw how i'm going to handle it...

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  • Myjoy gold member
    October 29

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    Awww this is so sad. I am sorry, I know this feeling, and like I was told at least u have a love 2 miss. Yeah I know it does not make it better but at least u have loved.