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Faded

The fallen sun
The glowing moon,
Shooting stars
and broken hearts.

Things can be mended,
Just give them time.

Scars heal,
Smiles appear,
You just need to remember,

Never forget,
But dont have regrets.
Live your life,
Like you have nothing left.

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I've only just started writing again,
And i'm still a tad rusty.

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  • Travis64
    November 16
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    I enjoyed what you had to say! Although simple, your poem contained a great message for your readers! I encourage you to continue writing...

    All My Best,

    ~Travis


  • fiona8 silver member
    October 29
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    A good start.
    Scars heal,
    Smiles appear
    Yes, they do, Nicely done.