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Filling Empty Spaces

How can I dream
How can I wish
So numb after so much pain
Yet I still feel for you
I still long for you
In all this empty space
I've filled it with your name, your face

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Possibly a Part Two in the future. Yes? No?

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  • phantommoves
    November 3, 2009
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    loved

    this-check my front page it has poetential to make us both feel two


  • The Drifter
    October 29, 2009

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    Poem deals with a tough time in anyone's life. The poem seems to address a new and very hurtful break-up. Nerves very raw, memories flooding the mind and in shock. Thank you for sharing this well written poem. It seems the flowers have hung their blooms low as wee would hang our heads.