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Treat Me Right

Who I was
is who I'll stay.
The kid I was
will never fade.
I know I am young
but I know how I feel.
Love is powerful
and so very real.
It is not to be messed with
or handled without care.
So please do not pretend with me
or my heart with surely tear.

Author notes

This one I wrote back in high school referring to a relationship I had in middle school that I believed was love. People said I changed, feelings were hurt and years later came this poem. I hope you like it

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 31

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    "I know I am young
    but I know how I feel." --> those lines are very true and well penned; few people acknowledge that at any age we can experience emotions and "love". It sounds as though you were very aware and that is what counts

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 29

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    People do change, this is a fact. But you said it best in the beginning- you are who you are and staying true to yourself is what matters most. Afterall, no one else can be you. I like this. Keep up the good work.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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