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Freddy's NightMare

Laying in my bed trying to stay awake
with fear in my head then numbers starting in my mind

One,Two He is coming for me i can hear him coming from his boiler room
His claws scaring on the wall

Three,Four locked my door but he is outside it
i can hear him

Five,Six i have lost my crucifix but i can't hear him any more
is he gone

Seven, eight i have stayed up late i must sleep now

then a hand of claws rips into my bed and a man is there with a brunt face and he say

" Nine, ten, never sleep again "

Then i wake up with a scream and look around
it was just a dream just a dream

Then there was a knock on my door i get up to open it then a voice says

" Knock Knock It's Freddy Again"

i made this so his NightMares will keep on going

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 1
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    Movie fan much?


  • Spike McCloud
    October 29
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    Very good. I like it a lot. It's got all the effects of a scene from a slasher horror flick. It keeps you on your toes. Great write.


  • Jasmine Minx
    October 29
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    This is so much better awesome. you used the rhyme and everything. remind me never to piss you off ok?