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Lost

Ravaged thrice by scars of hate
guilt now seeps and stains the ground,
where is justice when I call?
Fuck this shit!
I've died again.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 6

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    ahhhh.... you have managed to say a lot with very few words...a sign of a great poet for sure. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great writing. good luck. peace and light,
    Kendal


  • poetryismyoutlet
    October 29
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    Very nice.