As I lay in bed the darkness swallows my mind
I toss, I turn, I try to hide
the presence here is that of an evil kind
shadowy demonic figures creep closer to my side
As I lay in bed the darkness swallows my mind
I'm never really asleep, and I'm never really awake
is this real? is this fake? Am I alive? have I died?
have they come for my soul, to take?
As I lay in bed the darkness swallows my mind
bright demonic eyes gazing out from the shadows towards me
my heart races and anxiety takes hold
have I told you enough of my pain now can you see?
first poem... tell me all the good and bad! plz n thnx
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Welcome to AllPoetry!!!
Sometimes I can't go to sleep, but it is because of voices I hear...and sometimes I feel like something or someone is going to get me...You wrote your emotions well in this!
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
In all honesty, your first line alone told me enough of the pain that you see to completely understand every word written within this poem. I have lived this enough times and enough of my life to grasp every breath you've breathed into your virtual paper. I can't say that everything will turn out great, but I can say that the evils lessen with time and time is the only thing that will ever truly heal. Keep your chin up.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing.
Storm
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