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Languish

Fleeting glimpses
Dying fast
Dark eclipses
Clinging past

Familiar voices
Shadows lie
Tomorrow's choices
Failing die


Existence devoid
Struggle on
Meaning destroyed
Believing gone

 

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 1

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    this is awesome dreams of past life lived with out a second glance ..but the moment told another chance... well penned hun deep in thought hugs always Angel♥


  • mrocun
    October 29

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    I love your poetry, they are all excellent and you have mastered this form, but I'd love to see you experiment a little more and give something new a go..
    Have you every tried anything a little different?