At times in life I feel annoyed,
Of happiness I am devoid.
But times in life of charms and smiles
Are all I want for endless miles.
Sometimes in life I'm unimpressed.
With hateful friends I'm up and messed.
But times in life of peace of mind
Are all I ever wish to find.
These days in life are all hollow,
And muted, and invisible.
Some ways in life I will follow
To freedom of the mind and soul.
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I dedicate this poem to those people
Who’ve had enough of life as a mess.
Who want to relieve their mind and soul
And live their life for sure and not a guess.
Meaning: live their life with joy,
With happiness, love and satisfaction…
And not waste life, but accept and enjoy
The reality and imagination.
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I like to write about amazing things
In nature like the beautiful animals
Including the camel!
I also write about 'my own feelings' -
The ones that tell my story in verse.
My friends are my ‘words’.
I make sure that my poems contain
Hopes and not just fears insane.
There has to be a way out!
The greatest thing that excites me about writing
Is that I become aware of myself and my surrounding
Like the whole world or the universe itself.
My perfect day would include creativity,
The will to read and write poetry!
And not a day goes out in vain.
A contest entry
- Be An Author Of Your Own Book by storiesuntold.
480 points, ended October 29, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a great poem, I really do wish the world was like your poem
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I really love this poem! The secret of life is to live. Ain't that hard to figure out, yet people spend their whole lives trying to find the secret. People are always getting ready to live, but never living. Don't remember who said that. But, whatever. It's a really great poem!
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You think a lot of this world and wish others would do the
same. You can tell- only a horse can one lead. You have a good mind and a fine free spirit. There was a pleasure in reading your poem...mac
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ichigosama
and i totally agree. we all want freedom and most times we also are tired of life and crap. you made a very good poem to which all can relate. good job!!!!!!
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I really enjoyed reading this. The shifting styles work VERY well, and this is one of those poems in which rhymes don't seem forced, and it still flows so nicely...And I also appreciate how you made this reach out and attempt to give hope to readers. That's something that really can be therapeutic to some to read, and so your poem is not only well written, but well intended. VERY good job.
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MY FEELINGS TO BE WRITTEN ABOUT YOUR VERSE
Tell me that your story in your own words could excıte the souls here-Allpoetry! Perfect style ingredients including creativity of yours won't go out in vain, believe me.
I applaude you1
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Great work here
I loved your poem and your dedication and author note .You have found the greatest friend of all through poetry and hwhen one embraces themselves and becomes aware life is good
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This makes me smile and nod my head. Life's burdens take a toll and can wear down the spirit. We all need rejuvination and renewed hope.
Thank you for sharing -
wow i liked it. it was very good. great write. i love the way you seperated them.
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Wonderful write good luck with the contest fingers crossed for you as this is just amazing
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This is wonderful; I enjoyed it very much. All in all, it was pleasant and flowing to read.
Best of luck in the contest
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