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Bruise

My soul is bruised, i am startin to become confused by your actions
my life with u is startin to feel as if it is going to break,
conversation is far and wide, there r no words left to say.
  You have scared my heart and left wounds that will never heal, our love is starting to feel unreal,
I try to conceal all my pain bc i know if u see what you done to me you will deny and lie and say it was all me,
My soul is bruise and you have left my standing here alone and confuse.





( To my husband, most of my poems is to him )

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 30

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    The chat speak doesn't work in poetry...you also need to either change your background or darken your font color, because I had to hide the background to read it...with that said, you have written your sad emotions well in this!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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