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I Am Object/Slumberfest

Hush little baby, don’t say a thing,
let me lull you into a dream-sweet bliss.
I work for anyone; a twin, a queen, or a king.
Let me give you your goodnight kiss.
I’ll be your Knightly protector,
your dream-catcher’s aid.
I’ll be your nightmare deflector,
will make your troubles fade.
I’ll be your shoulder to cry on
when nobody’s around,
I’ll be the person you rely on
to drown out the scary sounds.
In your fights I’ll be your sword
And alternatively, shield.
I’ll  be there as you thank the lord
And stay with you till you’re healed.
I will unconditionally support you
no matter what your dream
I’ll be there through moments opportune
to muffle every scream.
I’ll endure your restless rolling
and dry your every tear
when the bells start tolling
I’ll quell your every fear.
When the monsters are too real
I’ll wrestle with your nightmares
I’ll quiet your every squeal
and lead your dreams to bright fairs.
Finally when you’re ready
I’ll summon your sandy friend.
Together we’ll weather any eddy
‘til we reach the night time’s end.

Author notes

This is another one I had to do for school in the perspective of an object. If you couldn't tell, I was a pillow. Tell me what you think, how well it was executed, what do you think about the rhyme, could you tell it was a pillow before I told you?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 30

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    pillow makes sense now, i don't even know what i was thinking but it all fits, i mean it is like one of those poems you can read from start to finish and catch the flow, i thinks it is good, keep it flowing


  • Chanes Forever
    October 28

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    YES!

    Awwwwwwwwww it's so kawaii Veeter!!! I knew it was a pillow before the poem even ended so yeah...I love the sing-song-y rhyme, haven't seen that from you in a while...

    In your fights I’ll be your sword
    And alternatively, shield.

    Lol, yes they are. Knasel and I would know, I pounded him in the face with one once. I really like the title too...As usual, Veeter blows Slav away, so she feels inspired to do celebratory dances with her streamers...She does them anyway because she's coming home for Halloween!!!! WOOT!