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a plea

so now you know
what's in a dream
where a rainbow ends
the force of God
and do you pity us?
who still have eyes
and cannot see?
send your love
in a thousand ways
until we know
the force of God

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 30

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Thought provoking indeed; grief makes us all act in different ways, sometimes good sometimes bad but always has us thinking the deeper thoughts we often refuse too

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
    ♥
    Stay safe
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 29

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This really provokes thought, at least in my mind. It's like that proverbial question that can never be answered yet we always seem to answer it ourselves. Good work.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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