She seals tomorrow with her smile.
Her heart shines bright,
like the sun in my eyes.
I listen closely as she speaks to me, saying,
"Is it too late to grab you by the hand and walk the other way?"
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I think this is so pretty. I really don't think there is such a thing as cliche. Emotion is emotion and I loved the imagery in this, honestly. Well done, dear. Keep it up.
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I've read some of your other pieces which was quite strong for me.
This one is a little bit too cliché.
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such a sweet short piece. her words must mean a lot to you.
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This isn't a personal piece. It's just something I thought of.
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cool. it's a beautiful piece nonetheless. a lovely write
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thank you
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